I just downloaded the game today and I must say it's great just for a demo! but you're planning to add this to the full version like SFX (I don't believe there was any throughout my demo playthrough), Background music, and Voice acting (If you plan for them to have actual voices). Errors with the demo uh might just be my issue, but that bathtub scene is not available in the gallery even though everything else is like the showing videos on the phone (Also glitches the Cumming scene for a split second through my playthrough), the couch, and hand job scene. Nonetheless, I'm impressed with your work, and hopefully, this makes it into a full-on game! thank you for making this & putting hard work into it!
This is an ok start for the game. I think the relationship between Scarlet and the MC moves a little fast, but I assume this game won't be too long considering it takes place over one weekend. I also don't really know where the story could go from here since it seems like the protag and Scarlet are just going to be having sex for the rest of the weekend. That's not really a problem considering this is a porn VN, but I think the story would be better with some kind of conflict or goal. Games like this are usually about finding a way to romance a girl to get to the sexy parts but that goal has already been reached. It makes the story feel kind of aimless in my opinion. Considering this is just a preview it's possible that the story just isn't up to the point where the main conflict is introduced.
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I just downloaded the game today and I must say it's great just for a demo! but you're planning to add this to the full version like SFX (I don't believe there was any throughout my demo playthrough), Background music, and Voice acting (If you plan for them to have actual voices). Errors with the demo uh might just be my issue, but that bathtub scene is not available in the gallery even though everything else is like the showing videos on the phone (Also glitches the Cumming scene for a split second through my playthrough), the couch, and hand job scene. Nonetheless, I'm impressed with your work, and hopefully, this makes it into a full-on game! thank you for making this & putting hard work into it!
This is an ok start for the game. I think the relationship between Scarlet and the MC moves a little fast, but I assume this game won't be too long considering it takes place over one weekend. I also don't really know where the story could go from here since it seems like the protag and Scarlet are just going to be having sex for the rest of the weekend. That's not really a problem considering this is a porn VN, but I think the story would be better with some kind of conflict or goal. Games like this are usually about finding a way to romance a girl to get to the sexy parts but that goal has already been reached. It makes the story feel kind of aimless in my opinion. Considering this is just a preview it's possible that the story just isn't up to the point where the main conflict is introduced.
By the way, will this game have NTR?
I'm curious, do you have any plans to create a version for different platforms?, or is it going to stay only on Windows?
when downloading, the .exe only produced a black window. I'm on Windows10, if that makes any difference.
I love your work so I hope that i can get to see what this is all about, too!
Hey, sorry for the late reply!
That's a bit odd, since it's the first time i heard about this. Can you tell me your system specs so i can investigate?